Blog 9 - Peer evaluation

100% work process, Presentation and Peer Evaluation

Panels of Alice's dream

Peer evaluation

- has the Japanese feel in it, and it suits the music that is composed well.
- however after seen the benchmark, my panels are lack of a lot of details compared to the benchmark.
- panel 4 the character looks like guy instead of girl
- the art style is good
- need more details

Lecturer's feedback

- could have pushed further if there're more time.
- lack of details
- can create more contrast with some of the elements in the panels
- sound is good, but very safe can create more depth in it.